Kia ora Kaia my name is Ayanda I go to Paihia School. I really like that you put some rhyming in your poem. Now I know how to make a narrative poem. Your poem reminds me about my poem about weather. I really enjoy making poems do you?
Kia ora Kaia my name is Mahana I go to Paihia School, I am a Year Five. Your narrative poetry reminds me of when I wrote a narrative about sunflowers and bees.I have sunflowers in my garden and the bees collect the pollen from the sunflower.What is your favorite flower?
Kia ora Kaia my name is Ayanda I go to Paihia School. I really like that you put some rhyming in your poem. Now I know how to make a narrative poem. Your poem reminds me about my poem about weather. I really enjoy making poems do you?
ReplyDeleteHello Ayanda. Thank you for your positive comment poems are fun as long as you know what to write.
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Kaia
ReplyDeleteKia ora Kaia my name is Mahana I go to Paihia School, I am a Year Five. Your narrative poetry reminds me of when I wrote a narrative about sunflowers and bees.I have sunflowers in my garden and the bees collect the pollen from the sunflower.What is your favorite flower?
Hi Mahana!. Thanks for your comment. I love bees because their so fascinating. My favourite flower is a Sunflower because of how elegant they are.
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Kaia