This is my poem about one of the 'Worst' Things I have done. I hope you like this poem. We Did this in our class so everyone made one whether it was in a book or on a Chromebook. It was really fun and I enjoyed making it and then decorating it on canvas a really cool site to make slides or posters on.
You did a really great job with this poem Kaia. Well done. The only feedback I can give is to choose a background that is more appropriate to the topic. Maybe one with lollies on it or something. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteCanva.com is the site :)
Hi Kaia
ReplyDeleteIts Shanaya from Kawakawa primary school
I liked the word you used "Delectable" where did you hear of it?
Maybe next time you could add a lollie backround otherwise i really liked it
Yours truly-
Shanaya
P.S Come check out my blog http://kpsshanayas.blogspot.com/
Kia ora Kaia,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you are brave enough to admit that you have eaten someone else's lollies. I hope you have replaced the lollies or shared something you enjoy with this person? ;-) Luckily they did taste delicious. I would love to read more of your writing.
Take cara,
Whaea Cara.